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July 23, 2013


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Move On (I made up this poem)

I remember when we were young,
We used you have lots  of fun,
But now those days are so long gone,
Like a distant train.

I remember when you were gone,
I was so rude,
I was so wrong.
Like I was lost.

I remember when You came back,
I was so happy,
That you were back.
Forever I wanted you.

I remember when I first saw you,
I lightened up,
Like a nightlight.
You made me smile.

And now....

I remember when we were young,
We used to have lots of fun,
And now those days are gone,
And now I realize that,
It's time to Move On.
300rupees Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i really like this :)
lots of meaning and i like how you brought the beginning back for the closing ^^
TinahMustang Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw thanks.:D
I did put some work into it o make this rhyme.
Lol thanks I see how some people will bring the beginning back o the end so I decided I'll do the same with this. 
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